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She lies there

Vulnerable

Trying to be unfeeling

Pain crashes into her mind

As the two hot tears leave

Her blue, black- lined eyes

Onto her hand

Onto her lips

The gray salt water

Refuses to wash away the pain

The pain he left her with

To sort out on her own

No one to help her back up

They have all left her

Broken- hearted and alone

In this world

Where her greatest enemy

Is her own mind

Her heart is broken

Her smile is nearly

Non- existent

Like rain in a drought

Hidden away

Like buried treasure

Lost forever

Those two tears

Are what comes when

She mourns over

Him
©2008-2009 ~summer-rainshine
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A poem I wrote 2 years ago.

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At first I didn't like the beginning but then it started getting toward the end it started to race back to me.The middle-down is great. And of course the only reason why I may be biased on the middle-up is because it's sad.................oh wait nvm I read it again, your good on this one. Yeah nice job.

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